Poetry day 6

After playing around with the sestet form yesterday, which i very much enjoyed and was quite pleased with the first result, here I am experimenting with the terza rima form.  I am less pleased with this although on paper, the structure looks 'easier' to work with.  I think this rhyme scheme diminishes what I was trying to do as it is clunky and appears forced.  However, this is all about trying and learning through failing and for that reason it stays!

Engineer

An engineer created your mind

He tinkered with your soul

But then it all began to unwind

You were once whole

Until fate or genes called the shots

And you were handed a new role

That wonderful mind turned to knots

Easier to bear once you ceased to know

And stopped worrying about everyone’s plots

That life force used to glow

And I missed it when it was gone

Your laughter stopped its flow

When you had forgotten where you were from

While your memory imploded like a bomb.